arguement

Globalization is it a good thing or is it a bad thing!!? In my opinion I believe that globalization can go many ways it can be defined on bases where you are from and where you live, and on the contrary it may be based on what you religious beliefs maybe. Globalization in my opinion is a great topic to argue about in class because it can have many answers and definitions on how to be answered. Some of the topics for example could be based on how is globalization influenced on a country? How can globalization be a down fall in ways in low budget countries?

           

Globalization is a wide spread of networking in the world today I believe globalization is the strongest networking ways of which other countries in the world come together by saying I got what you want and you got what I want, not just from the high income countries but also from the low income countries as well.

 

With that said globalization has a key argument that makes up a great wide spread of what to expect from globalization some of the ways globalization can also be a great topic to argue over is that globalization can help one country and destroy another or make a country better but destroy or harm the citizens that are in the country. For example the sweatshops that we have been talking about in class I feel that the low income countries are making moneys and profits off of the products which they are selling to a big income corporate company, when they don’t even think about the manual labor which was produce during the making process of this item or product which has been sold for very cheep to other countries which may sell the product and sold for millions of dollars off the product that is about 50 cents in the low budget countries to make!!!

 

Globalization can be an argument of the nature stating that it can be a positive up look in many ways is because globalization may help out the countries that may need help and with that said low income countries maybe helped or picked up by the bigger income countries which may help them become a middle income country which in a couple of years from now can be a up coming country. For example united states which is a big income country and India which is a low class country at one time now that researchers study the income and the economy of India they have found out that in a couple of years India that is a little country has the potential to become a high income country just by networking and staying close to many high income countries I think that is very impressive!!!

 

One Response to “arguement”

  1. oneworldcommunity Says:

    Thanks Will, some suggestions as you move forward:

    Make sure your thesis is clear in the first paragraph.

    Use the handout that I e-mailed Sunday to organize your paper a bit more.

    Finally, i highly recommend going to the Writing Center for some help with the things that I marked in the first paper. You have some great ideas, but need some help with organization and sentence structure.

    Thanks!

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